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I liked the story but it was so short. I see a long blooming relationship for two lonley women. Please don't let this end here.
Agreed
Liked the story but the lovemaking and real enjoyment left the reader hanging and wanting to read more of this story. Keep writing as this could really turn into one hot sexy romance with several more chapters.
A wonderful begging
But you can't leave it here! You MUST write more of this story, having started so well! Thank you -- five stars.
Excellent!!..........
......But you must continue the story.
What happened to the truck?
Seriously, this is a basis for an ongoing saga in which you can develop both the characters and their strengths and weaknesses.
Bravo
And your name is?
Picky I know, but Sally was mentioned by name before being introduced. :-P
Please continue
I agree with other comments. I usually like short and sweet stories that don't fill out all of the details about the future, but I really feel this one is begging for a continuation!
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