If you're going to post a nonconsensual/reluctance story in the group sex category, you need to give your audience a warning at the beginning. Rape is a trigger for a lot of people, even among people who read porn.
Improvements could have been made with an editor; it's not terrible, but it doesn't flow very well.
When I read this story I thought it was about a woman who was evolved in an orgy with men and women. This is not a group sex story, it is a combination of anal and rough sex and a gang bang! Big difference.
On the other hand, the story was good though but it was pretty disgusting which I think it was the author's intent. I'm not a fan favorite of anal sex and this story is the reason why.
Either way it was understandably read, just not my cup of tea.
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This is NonConsensual.. Thanks for the warning
If you're going to post a nonconsensual/reluctance story in the group sex category, you need to give your audience a warning at the beginning. Rape is a trigger for a lot of people, even among people who read porn.
Improvements could have been made with an editor; it's not terrible, but it doesn't flow very well.
Not what I expected
When I read this story I thought it was about a woman who was evolved in an orgy with men and women. This is not a group sex story, it is a combination of anal and rough sex and a gang bang! Big difference.
On the other hand, the story was good though but it was pretty disgusting which I think it was the author's intent. I'm not a fan favorite of anal sex and this story is the reason why.
Either way it was understandably read, just not my cup of tea.
Hot n dirty
Raw eroticism at its darkest.Thanks.
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