Changing Her

Absurd

Is this how girls are to be treated? Don't you ever stop to think that after reading such stuff boys might get wrong ideas? Sex is also called love-making.. There's not an iota of love in this one!
You may question me why I read this. I am doing a research on the effect of internet porn on rapists.
After reading such stories, against their better judgement, guys may be tempted to try these out. And, since such stories are so damn easily available to a layman like me, I am scared to think about the kind of porn people who are "dedicated" to it find.
Please stop this. This doesn't do you any good than give a moment of satisfaction.
You have absolutely no idea about the utter humiliation and embarrassment faced by sexually harassed girls
It is my sincere request to quit writing such stories. Please channelise your creativity in a good way.
Even if one such writer stops, I'll feel obliged.

Yours,
Sam

Asurd II

So the hero of this tale is 18 and starting at age 16 has done 100 women. Lost me right there in the first paragraph. Grow up.

Rubbish

Cant be bothered to login to comment on this!
You wanted our comments.This is total rubbish. Never write again.

Repulsive.

Use that knife on your tiny, little dick

Stupid, idiotic and demeaning to men and women. Grow up. Most women respond much better to flattery and compliments than with a weapon. I think you should never write another story again. Immature.

Write On!

Interesting start with the antagonist taking the full overt method instead of the subtle coercive seduction method. What's next?

Good Start

You're going to get a lot of hate, and for that I am sorry, but this is a good start. People forget this is the non-consent section where people fantasize about rape, and I must say this fantasy has hit a great beginnings of something quite great for the people here who love to fantasize about such a loss of control. Keep it going!

ya u need a good lesson in common sense and some therapy to treat that nasty side of u

Now u do have an opportunity to keep this going do some nasty but have the good guys win when its done and repay these asses for there insensitive and dangerous treatment of female classmates. So give it a go can u rescue this story

Jim

Do read the section heading first

Yes, this story is absurd. But in the real world, that IS what cops, courts, and juries are for. Not every one who reads this section is a demented fiend or will become one just by reading it. Those that can not tell the difference between fantasy and reality will not be deterred simply by not reading rape fantasy literature on literotica, or by not watching violence on tv, or by not playing violent video games. Even if all of these things disappeared completely, let alone what impact this would have on people who can enjoy these things normally, guess what; real crime will still happen in the real world by people who are willing to commit it if they are able to succeed.

So much hate is directed towards some of these authors by some of the commenters at times. If you don't like it, then don't read it! Personally, I did not like the "prick" aspect to it, though it was rather expected due to the story subject. There were other aspects of the story I did like. Now, some of these stories are screwed up enough that you may wonder if some of the authors do have some issues; but perhaps also they are just writing out a fantasy (or idea) that has little bearing on their real world persona. Fantasies are just fantasies, real world behavior is not. Perhaps all the haters should realize that. After all, what does any reader in this section get out of these stories? Oh, it MUST simply be a desire to really rape (or humiliate) women.

Awesome

This was great. Really, I am saving the link for this page and I will be sure to check back for updates.

amused

A good first attempt. What I'm amused by is all the hater comments. This story is on a borderline pornographic website in a section called "nonconsent". What do they expect to find?
What I find interesting about the story, assuming the author was truthful in her bio, is that she is a young woman writing from the view point of a teen boy. However, the nature of the things visited on the girl and how presented in the story gives it the air of a masturbatory fantasy of the writer as opposed to just an interesting work of fiction. To me, knowing the author is a female, that adds an extra level of interest and excitement to the story which overcomes the impossibility of the scenerio.

I hope to see more.

Absolutely boring a waste of time

well...

... I agree with the comment by 'Bressac'