After having everything shoved in there but the family car? Unless it refers to the first time with a real cock in her pussy.
Watching her and brother fuck! When did that happen? Before dad fucked her or after? If before it wasn't virgin pussy.
by
Anonymous09/24/14
To Averygoodlay.
Read the first chapter. Otherwise, you just made yourself look foolish with your comment and question.
by
Anonymous09/24/14
To Averygoodlay
I agree with anonymous. I am sick of seeing these people who are brave enough to send in their stories being criticised by uninformed dickheads who haven't got the talent or guts to send something in themselves. If you don't like it you have two options as a decent human being: don't read it OR leave CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. As an ignorant man you obviously did neither. Enough said.
I in no way intend to knock anybody's opinion here, all are entitled. Thank you to both of the anonymous comments, i appreciate the support. I don't know what the general consensus is on the matter of 'virgin pussy' but i believe that a woman is a virgin until she has had sexual intercourse with a man. So therefore, the girl is still a virgin the first time she has physical penetrative sex with the 'dad' in this fantasy. Also, yes, its best to read chapter 1 first. Thanks for the feedback though.
Because of the crap I caught both here and in emails, I read ch1 and have to say that it was far worse than ch2 as there was no story to it no background leading up to the sex.
But it didn't explain if the brother got her cherry before the father or he fucked her after the father.
No I am not a writer BUT I am a reader and these stories don't make sence, I do think it's great that Lily has put herself out there for our enjoyment and for that she gets my thanks, but would not be doing her any favors by not telling her what I see wrong.
Also I have the guts to put my name here unlike the gutless Anonymous people.
OK give it your best shot!
Has just cum!
Lily I think its time for grand-pa to visit! Of course daddy might also take her to meet his friends at the barber shop. Great writing. Unless a dried up old English teacher is grading you.
English
Virgin pussy????????????
After having everything shoved in there but the family car? Unless it refers to the first time with a real cock in her pussy.
Watching her and brother fuck! When did that happen? Before dad fucked her or after? If before it wasn't virgin pussy.
To Averygoodlay.
Read the first chapter. Otherwise, you just made yourself look foolish with your comment and question.
To Averygoodlay
I agree with anonymous. I am sick of seeing these people who are brave enough to send in their stories being criticised by uninformed dickheads who haven't got the talent or guts to send something in themselves. If you don't like it you have two options as a decent human being: don't read it OR leave CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. As an ignorant man you obviously did neither. Enough said.
Okay...
I in no way intend to knock anybody's opinion here, all are entitled. Thank you to both of the anonymous comments, i appreciate the support. I don't know what the general consensus is on the matter of 'virgin pussy' but i believe that a woman is a virgin until she has had sexual intercourse with a man. So therefore, the girl is still a virgin the first time she has physical penetrative sex with the 'dad' in this fantasy. Also, yes, its best to read chapter 1 first. Thanks for the feedback though.
As recommeded
Because of the crap I caught both here and in emails, I read ch1 and have to say that it was far worse than ch2 as there was no story to it no background leading up to the sex.
But it didn't explain if the brother got her cherry before the father or he fucked her after the father.
No I am not a writer BUT I am a reader and these stories don't make sence, I do think it's great that Lily has put herself out there for our enjoyment and for that she gets my thanks, but would not be doing her any favors by not telling her what I see wrong.
Also I have the guts to put my name here unlike the gutless Anonymous people.
OK give it your best shot!
good
waiting for part 3 maybe the mother can join in
Hope this one continues soon.
Ooo this old man
Has just cum!
Lily I think its time for grand-pa to visit! Of course daddy might also take her to meet his friends at the barber shop. Great writing. Unless a dried up old English teacher is grading you.
hell yeah
I know it's been a while but please get round to part 3! as 1 and 2 have made cum hard.
I love a women who knows and owns her true being.
Very sexy.
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