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Color of the Bedsheets

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/23/14

I was hoping he would wake up to a huge pile of shit on his pillow next to his face. This story sucked big balls

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by Anonymous09/24/14

Short with potential

Nevermind the idiot who didn't like the story. It was a little short but you could definitely follow up with the perfectionist loosening up and the relationship evolving. I liked it and it was well written. I just wished there was more of it.

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by Anonymous09/24/14

Short and sweet

I actually just really liked that!

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