All Comments on 'The Milf Next Door'

This is a hot story of a younger man with a willing older woman.

It would improve greatly with correct punctuation and spelling, which was distracting.

It would improve if it was edited.

Still liked this story...the way you put it together...the passion...well done!

great story and it takes me back to my youth a great read for any young man to learn from very well done thank you Tenbears 43

i am 49 year old woman and had an affair with 24 year old virgin guy, he was shy but wanted sex, we had a two week affair and i will never forget his reaction or the look on his face the first time he came inside me

Thanks for sharing.

Thank you for all your feedback everyone, and thank you for reading!

Yes there were some grammar and spelling issues and the spacing of the lines did make for a difficult reading experience ... HOWEVER ... it was a good story and I did enjoy it a lot! Thanks for sharing and I look forward to the hot MILF neighbour teaching Joe a lot more about sex!

Cheers

Lance

There were so many errors in punctuation, use of the wrong homophones, and the separation of quotes from the rest of their sentences, that this story was next to impossible to read, let alone (not "yet" alone, as in the story) enjoy.

I strongly suggest that the author take advantage of Literotica's free editing help, before posting any more stories.

Mediocre, unimaginative, semi-literate, predictable and derivative.

You need to work on your 'writing' skills. And, loosen up your imagination.

*** Thanks for the read.

Good read.....

Too many errors in the story. Did he buy a house or rent an apartment. Sentences often don't make sense. I'm guessing English is not your first language.