Very, very nicely done. Damn good piece of writing.
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Anonymous09/24/14
Fabulously written
I really appreciate when there is a bit of inner dilemma, with the main character. I hope to feel it even more in the second chapter. Will she resist or give into her primal urges?
Well done.
I disagree - I think you stop at the perfect moment - Mmmm, got me going / got me thinking and fantasising about what cums (excuse the pun) next - thanks x
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Fantastic, I hope there is a 2nd part to come?
Very, very nicely done. Damn good piece of writing.
Fabulously written
I really appreciate when there is a bit of inner dilemma, with the main character. I hope to feel it even more in the second chapter. Will she resist or give into her primal urges?
Well done.
You write perfectly... But why did you stop at the best part? Both sex and storywise...
Horny
I disagree - I think you stop at the perfect moment - Mmmm, got me going / got me thinking and fantasising about what cums (excuse the pun) next - thanks x
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