All Comments on 'Forgive Me...But You're Mine Ch. 03'

by Kissmesweet

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FA_JFFA_JFover 9 years ago
You're baaaaaaaack!

Some 'fun' noncon...just what we needed around here. The realism of the characters and situation is excellent. Looking forward to more.

MinxxkittenMinxxkittenover 9 years ago
five stars !

TOOO SHORT ! update ASAP !

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Welcome Back!!! :)

You've been gone too long, but glad now that you're back. A good, but too short a chapter. Looking forward to a more longer and quicker chapter 4. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
to anon "ugh" - completely unnecessary, mean spirited and rude

Show some respect to the author, even if you don't like the writing. Couldn't you have come up with a more intelligent way of providing feedback? Or was that the most intelligent thing you could think of to say?

I, for one, am super glad you've chosen to continue the story... Haven't read this latest chapter yet but am looking forward to it. I like the premise so far ... I encourage you to keep at it. Your story is one that I keep on checking for updates . thanks!

kroellekroelleover 9 years ago
Yeahh!!

Great to see this story continue!

Can't wait to find out how the two eventually wind up together.

KissmesweetKissmesweetover 9 years agoAuthor
Why the chapter is so short

I just want to explain why the chapter is so short. This is the last instalment before I begin to introduce sex into the story and where I can just focus on explaining who these two people trapped in this intense situation are. Now you know the stakes and the complications setting Nicki and Jared's story. I shall go on to explain what happens next :) x

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wow.

This is a great story in the making. Pls post soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.

WhatdidJanetdoWhatdidJanetdoover 9 years ago
Glad you're back.

I loved the beginning of this story and I'm so happy you have continued it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks.

MattigotMattigotover 9 years ago
Finally

I have been waiting for an update on this story, please continue writing.

Horseman68Horseman68over 7 years ago
Why???

It is hard to understand why an author so talented would forsake this story for so long. She is too good a writer to not know herself how good the storyline and personalities are. We know that she is still writing from a note that she placed about a year ago about getting back to the story. But, that was a year ago; hope that life has not thrown her curve. .

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