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Laura's Dream

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/27/14

welcome to lit

What a lovely thing for a husband to do for his wife. This is romance between loving married people. This is the place for it ignore idiot anon comments. It was a nice short entry in to the lit site.

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by Anonymous09/28/14

romance how do you rate it

maybe this is something they have talked about and wanted to do
thought was a good read
lady shield could do a part 2 and add more fun to the dream

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by chytown09/28/14

Fun Read****

Thanks for sharing your story it's very different and very entertaining.

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by JWren09/29/14

Imaginative, passionate and arousing. But try to avoid "she felt" and just describe what she's feeling (eg she felt his cock soften in her mouth = his cock softened in her mouth).

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by Anonymous10/13/14

fun

I very much enjoyed thi story. It was good for a first try.

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