You'll get some wanting the swinging story, but I'd rather you stuck with the kids. Bringing in the salesgirl sounds good, but leave the parents out of it. And don't get into anal, please. Just the kids fucking up a storm, plenty of oral, swapping the juices, having a good time.
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Anonymous07/16/09
I agree
Do not put the parents in
I never enjoy incest stories that involves all four family members doing it - family orgies take away the secrecy and teasing factor of incest/taboo for me
This is a porn site, and the two angels above want you to for go getting mummy and dada into the mix. Go with your instincts ALWAYS. Professional writers have a very good method of controlling the tendency to add or subtract too much from any story. They're called "editors". You're doing just fine. Good show so far!
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Anonymous06/20/13
cute story
Yes, a cute story, but isn't there something you writers can do to draw out the screw scenes? I mean there I am just getting stiff over the fuck scene, and all of a sudden it's over. What's up?
English
Don't mess it up
You'll get some wanting the swinging story, but I'd rather you stuck with the kids. Bringing in the salesgirl sounds good, but leave the parents out of it. And don't get into anal, please. Just the kids fucking up a storm, plenty of oral, swapping the juices, having a good time.
I agree
Do not put the parents in
I never enjoy incest stories that involves all four family members doing it - family orgies take away the secrecy and teasing factor of incest/taboo for me
What childish nonsense...
This is a porn site, and the two angels above want you to for go getting mummy and dada into the mix. Go with your instincts ALWAYS. Professional writers have a very good method of controlling the tendency to add or subtract too much from any story. They're called "editors". You're doing just fine. Good show so far!
cute story
Yes, a cute story, but isn't there something you writers can do to draw out the screw scenes? I mean there I am just getting stiff over the fuck scene, and all of a sudden it's over. What's up?
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