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The Teacher: My First Time

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/29/14

Second read on literotica

A friend suggested this site, and my first story was a disappointment, however, your story was a delight. I am looking forward to part two. Thanks for a great read. I think I might like this sight, if most stories are as good as yours.

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by Anonymous09/29/14

Keep writing

We have established who Joan is, but who is Anna?

This is a good beginning to a story. Keep writing.

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by literman4109/29/14

Real good...

You have too keep it going...

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by CanadianM09/29/14

I apologize

In writing the story I changed the name of the character from Anna to Joan and it seems I missed one of the Anna's. My bad. I will try to make sure there is better editing next time...

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by Anonymous09/29/14

Nice!!

I have a crush on Joan (and Anna, too). My dream "teacher." Well-written, perfectly paced. Excellent story with many future possibilities.

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by Mark73709/30/14

Don't leave me haning!

PLEASE write some more!!!!

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by Anonymous10/01/14

Great start, BANG ON!

I relate to this, really Great start, BANG ON!

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by Anonymous10/04/14

Part 2

I loved part 1, you've got to make a Part 2.

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by rightbank10/11/14

she should restrict her teaching to elementary students

and so should the writer!

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by CanadianM10/11/14

Too Bad

It is too bad http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?u id=1481648 rightbank that you did not like the story. But perhaps you could provide some constructive comments which would be much more helpful.

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by Anonymous10/21/14

Keep going ...

great start, now don't stop

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by Anonymous10/26/14

A Grammarian!

Wow! At last someone who knows how to use "lie" and "lay"!

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by WatcherRob11/16/14

Mixed up names??

I was so caught up in the story I didn't notice any name changing. That must be the sign of a good story.

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by Anonymous11/22/14

Keep Going Tell Me More!

I was so caught up in the story. That must be the sign of a good story.

The ( your ) story was so hot that half way thru I was jacking off my hardon cock, your story I hope was true ... please keep writing more.


I am so freaking hard s I am sending this !

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by Sman444407/05/16

We should all be taught early!

Loved your story. I wish I had been taught by someone like that and at that age. I wasted many years without the proper education. I find literotica stories to be excellent teachers - thanks for yours!

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