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by Anonymous

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by JWren09/26/14

Changing . . .

. . . seasons and partners. Touching comparison. Similarly, falling leaves in October and lovers parting.

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by Ashesh909/26/14

juxtaposed couple in a cleverly designed Poem

against the Change of Seasons , OldFriend !! 5-ed .

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by HoneyAdored10/01/14

Sigh!...

...A wonderful walk through a poem, the words flow beautifully and the vision portrayed as always, vivid in my mind, the contrast of the potential sadness against the beautiful scenic backdrop is thought provoking and made me feel.

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