Good story but you have rushed it a bit. You needed to build up the scene first of all, so that there was more tension before she got to the bedroom. Likewise more detail during the strapping. Loved the ending!
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Good story but you have rushed it a bit.
You needed to build up the scene first of all, so that there was more tension before she got to the bedroom.
Likewise more detail during the strapping.
Loved the ending!
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