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The Caning of Her Life

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/04/14

She knew what to do

Go to the hospital where they detailed her injuries. Then to the Police to have him arrested. Then to a lawyers to file suit. Then to Court where he was convicted and sentenced to 12 years in prison. A poor story of torture. Not a single interesting or worthwhile thing in this whole mess. Just plain terrible.

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by StoryofWoe10/04/14

Good flow.

Does the "..." at the end mean there's going to be a sequel? :P Your sentences flow together really well, which leads me to assume that you're an avid reader. I'm curious as to why you decided not to use quotations for the dialogue, since you went to the trouble of typing out all of his instructions. Lots of good detail (drooling around the gag, tears, his boxers being uncomfortable, etc.). Keep writing!

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