I am very jealous of your writing and story telling skills. I felt like I was right there in the speakeasy watching the action. Bravo!
I like it,some oddities on time frame but very good writing. Please continue, but 2 page posts are better, if possible.
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What talent!
I am very jealous of your writing and story telling skills. I felt like I was right there in the speakeasy watching the action. Bravo!
Thank you
I like it,some oddities on time frame but very good writing. Please continue, but 2 page posts are better, if possible.
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