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The Hike Ch. 05

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by Anonymous09/28/14

Great ending

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by Anonymous09/28/14

Good job

Finally a non-cuck ending. Though, interesting that the dude never popped up in the story after the Hike lol.

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by Anonymous09/28/14

Decent

you started off with something that most men have had, a bitchy girlfriend but you went too far from there. I liked the first two chapters but after that I just wanted to finish the series in case you brought it back.

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by Anonymous10/26/14

Very nice

Wow, great ending to a great story. I'm really impressed. Not your conventional cheating story - this was really painful to read (in a good way) and after all he went through, "Dexter's" revenge wasn't over the top at all. Becky deserved it and more.

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