Finally a non-cuck ending. Though, interesting that the dude never popped up in the story after the Hike lol.
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Anonymous09/28/14
Decent
you started off with something that most men have had, a bitchy girlfriend but you went too far from there. I liked the first two chapters but after that I just wanted to finish the series in case you brought it back.
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Anonymous10/26/14
Very nice
Wow, great ending to a great story. I'm really impressed. Not your conventional cheating story - this was really painful to read (in a good way) and after all he went through, "Dexter's" revenge wasn't over the top at all. Becky deserved it and more.
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Great ending
Good job
Finally a non-cuck ending. Though, interesting that the dude never popped up in the story after the Hike lol.
Decent
you started off with something that most men have had, a bitchy girlfriend but you went too far from there. I liked the first two chapters but after that I just wanted to finish the series in case you brought it back.
Very nice
Wow, great ending to a great story. I'm really impressed. Not your conventional cheating story - this was really painful to read (in a good way) and after all he went through, "Dexter's" revenge wasn't over the top at all. Becky deserved it and more.
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