Jill Watches Me Suck Jake

This is so sexy. Its my fantasy to suck another mans big hard cock while a woman watches me and gets off and tells me what a good little cock sucker I am. I would love that.

Why on EARTH

...did you put this story in Loving Wives?

Seriously.

Agree with @swingerjoe!!!

How could this Gay story be put in LW? Two gays and a wife watching, make it LW? The husband some day soon will pay for being sucked by man....His wife will cash in her debt...Then will be a LW story, the gay husband being cuckolded...

Sad

Sad and pathetic way to spend your time .... Inserting your turd tamper tales into LW. Go be gay in the gay category.

Consistency for Serial Stories

First ... I think authors screw over their readers when they post a series under different names within a sequential tale OR when they post chapters in different categories. There MAY some readers who follow an author's postings by looking into a particular Author Page. Most readers, I suspect, look on the Current-Postings Page of their favorite category(s) and read stories which sound interesting for that day.

In Other Words ... Post continuing tales under the same title (starting with CH1) within the ONE category which best describes the theme of the SERIES (NOT each chapter!)

This chapter is in a serial which is clearly GAY MALE! Moreover, this chapter is ALSO Gay Male. Yeah, there is a wife involved as a voyeur (= adventurous) and her role is NOT trivial within this chapter (the chapter would be 'just one more blowjob' without Sweetie taking an unusual role.) It is an interesting chapter, involving real concerns (including fear of exposure) and demonstrating positive feelings of affection and respect between the marital partners. BUT, the main (only) action IS the (very graphically described) BeeJay!

Bottom Line: GAY MALE chapter in a GAY MALE serial!

unrated in LW.
In GM I would give it a 4 or 5!
In LW, I would rate 2!

Addendum - edit FAIL

Sorry, in the second sentence, it should read "There MAY be some readers ..." (Left out the 'be!')

@IMPO ... Don't forget ... Sweetie is getting her fill (hehehe) of Hubby, both in frequency and in ManMeat Mass. She just can't comfortably administer a Knob Job and she likes Hubby enough to tolerate him getting pleasure from a different mouth.

Gay shit

# 1

A Cocksucker in a loving wives story?

Wrong category. You did not have to tell us about yourself.

Fuck the Naysayers

A good story that turned me on. I like sucking my wife's lovers cocks. The naysayers are jealous if anything.

Story not long enough for me to finish jacking off, but good nonetheless.

re: Fuck the Naysayers

Yes, by all means listen to the person who's so uncomfortable with their own opinions they can't stand it when others dare to have a different opinion.

Fun story

Quite a few women have a desire to see guys together. Many would like to see their guy suck a big one.

Gay shit, -1*

different

had a twist and was good

viva la difference!

nice departure from the standard fare around here. I'm always amazed how folks who read the other twisted tales on this site get so indignant when a guy sucks a cock! if you dont like it don't read it.

Hot!

I love to masturbate while watching my husband go down on a guy. I just wish I could talk him into taking one in the ass. Great story!

Literotica's call

Readers irate over what section a story is listed under should realize that it isn't the author's call. The final decision belongs to Literotica and as a writer I've had a few stories listed under categories I didn't choose myself. Not sure what the case is here but for people to mindlessly opine or punish the author is childish, especially when the title of a story tells you all you need to know about the content. Just saying.