Yes, we all would have preferred more but this is the author's labor and I think what was said was what the writer wanted said at this point of the storyline.
Remember each page of Literotica is up to 3500/3800 words. 5 or 6 pages in my Mac/Pages WP. Anyway a lot of work to create and correct.
In my opinion eg did a swell job of clearly expressing what needed to be said to the point of this cliffhanger.
I hardly can wait for the next chapter, this was graphic and opened my appetite for more the only problem was the story was too short . Please update soon and if is possible longer chapters .
Im really loving the direction youre going its not just a story about sex that has vampires and other creatures in it. Its more of a story about an incubus and vampires and other creatures that just so happens to have sex in it. You sir (or maam) have me checking literotica every day to see if you have posted a new chapter
Hey, everyone, chapter 4 should be coming a lot faster. I just wrapped up the process of moving recently, so now I've got a lot more butt in chair time!
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Too little!!
That was barely anything at all! Good, but hardly worth wait
succinct
Yes, we all would have preferred more but this is the author's labor and I think what was said was what the writer wanted said at this point of the storyline.
Remember each page of Literotica is up to 3500/3800 words. 5 or 6 pages in my Mac/Pages WP. Anyway a lot of work to create and correct.
In my opinion eg did a swell job of clearly expressing what needed to be said to the point of this cliffhanger.
great chapter
I hardly can wait for the next chapter, this was graphic and opened my appetite for more the only problem was the story was too short . Please update soon and if is possible longer chapters .
Love
This is a great story. Keep up the good work.
Im loving it
Im really loving the direction youre going its not just a story about sex that has vampires and other creatures in it. Its more of a story about an incubus and vampires and other creatures that just so happens to have sex in it. You sir (or maam) have me checking literotica every day to see if you have posted a new chapter
This story is fantastic!
I've enjoyed reading this story with its well thought out plot that is entirely different than any other scifi/nonhuman story I've read so far.
Can't wait to read more :)
Thanks, all
Hey, everyone, chapter 4 should be coming a lot faster. I just wrapped up the process of moving recently, so now I've got a lot more butt in chair time!
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