Motherly Love

Great

You know a lot of people on this site consider this cliche but its actually a more rare story than it seems. Most times, the moms are single. Most times, the moms do not get pregnant, nor does the story continue after. And most times, the author does something really weird from out of left field that fucks it all up. Happy to see here that is not the case so far. So, glad to hear you will continue, don't be afraid of what some consider cliche when actually these kinds of themes are more rare for incest stories. And I hope you don't do anything weird, like stuff that's in your other stories. Those themes belong in those stories, while the ones in this one should remain the focus. Thanks.

Just a humorous question

Look... excerpt from the story.
...all I could think about was Mom in my shower. than ...After almost an hour of coaxing and stretching
Now can you tell me who's the manufacturer of this extraordinary water heater that can supply almost 1 hour of hot water...is 'cause I want one.
Other than that I liked the story, to me MILF is like milk " It does the body good"
One suggestion or wish, that his friend Josh can appreciate the taste of a MILF either Chase's mother or his own if the opportunity arises. I'll be waiting for the next chapter to see where it goes.

To mrusa

Come to Australia where a large percentage of the population has gas hot water systems which run continuously.

The ending was weird

One minute he is doing her in the butt and the next it's over. Almost like a quickie.

more chapters this one is hot 5 stars

was good except for the cheating on the innocent husband.if he was aasshat that was cheating or beating or dead then 10 for 10,i just dont like the cheating(wife cheated on me with her friends husband).

Response

Thanks for the feedback. I'd like to say that I didn't really need the dad to get cheated on, he's just a plot development point. It's an option, better this than the mom and son in a giant house with really expensive cars for no reason at all. And, just for the record, I did imply that they were rich, and beyond that, my hot water heater'll run hot water for hours.

anyone notice that this gifted author is a very young guy?

tin is 18 to 22 years old, this is his first venture into family fucking, and I've got to say in my opinion this is definitely his strong suit. It's a terrific story of hot motherfucking, with some nice touches. Like when 20 year old Chase is fucking his mother and starts to call her by her first name, she stops him cold and demands that he call her "mom." That's the way it should be between a mother and her son. It nails down exactly what's happening. A boy is sticking his hard young cock up the same cunt he came out of. And he's about to blow his hot young balls up his own damn birth canal, where he came into the world from. As with other similar couples, once they've breached the dread and totally idiotic "taboo," there's no stopping them. Chase's cock is up his own mother's warm wet ever-loving twat more than it's just hanging down over his balls. The boy shoots so much of his precious semen up inside his mom that he winds up fucking a baby up where he was a baby. Chase is now a motherfucker bursting with pride. Pride in his courage, pride in his big thrusting cock, and pride in his potent baby-making balls.

Knocked it down

Knocked it down from four or five stars because of fucking over dad making him think he knocked her up, was he a bad guy? if not he didn't deserve that, I understand if he didn't the both mom and son would be in big trouble.
Then there was the anal, why so many stories have to have anal is just fucked up and kinda gay (yes I have done anal a few times, just not my cup of tea)

Very Good Story

Liked it very much. Please write more like this hot & sexy. You had me fingering myself and had a great orgasm wishing I was the one getting fucked. Hurry up and write the next chapter.
Thanks,
Lynn

Good story, but........

I think you needed some more into the characters...the sex between them...a bit more development! They went from a discussion about risque lingerie to fucking a bit quick!

Thanks

I want to say thank you for all the positive and constructive feedback on the story. A second chapter is in the works, and I hope all of you will read it. As a little spoiler, the next chapter is a little further down the timeline. And I would like to apologize for doing terrible things to the father's character, but I needed some seed of plot development. If you want to give me ideas for that, please provide feedback to my account, directly.

Well done

I can visualize mom's belly swelling up with her son's baby, and dad is kept in the dark.

I would think she'll get even more horny once she is in her pregnancy a little more.

interesting idea

try using the idea of letting the dad catch them in the act.

Does this really happen, or is this just a fantasy?

I can't really imagine this happening, the persistent guilt and loss of normal mother/son relationship must be dangerous at worst, or very unsettling at least?

To anon

It is fantasy. Nothing like this ever happens...