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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/02/14

Super

Excellent! More please!

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by Anonymous10/02/14

Glad you're back!

This felt like a good start to a new series! I enjoyed the start of "Road Trip" but it got into awkward territory with Gayle and her husband - after tying the men's cocks together with ribbons and then the guys cumming on each other, there was nowhere good left to go with that story. But the start was hot!

So is this going to remain a Sub/Dom and fetish tale or is it headed into uncomfortable weirdness?

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by Libertineman10/03/14

Thought provoking

This story brought back memories of a song first recorded in 1966, by the group The Outsiders, titled "Bend Me, Shape Me (any way you want me)". In jlltec's story, El took control of John, and started shaping his future. We are products of our experiences, so I am now wondering if Carol Dexheimer, my first full sexual experience, could have guided me in a similar way. Had she been more dominant, I think so.

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by mrwidehorizons04/20/15

Excellent!

Hope to see more. This is just the rite amount if twisted!

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by MartyFisher01/08/16

Whew!

I should be so lucky to find someone like El!!!

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