Bovine-X

Seriously?

Even for a fantasy/fetish story, this girl is stupid. Hard to get into when the main character is this big a dumbass.

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She was meant to be stupid, like the typical selfish, inpatient, despicable, spiteful rich girl. I can't say that as a character she will get better, but I can promise that characters in this series will be cardboard cutouts, they'll make The Room's character's seem important.

This is really good.

Great story. Can't wait until the next part of this one. he has to be stupid and inpatient, that the way teenagers are when there is something they want bad. They will do what they need to achieve their goals. They do not think of the negative out come of their actions until it's to late.

its all good

i have faith the athour will sell this story right i mean read their other entrys

Great