How Much Do You Think I Would Bring

So...

... do we get a finish to the story? Is this the true story of Cum on Eileen?

This is a rewrite-plagaristic-repost of a radically dumb story about someone with too much money that can actually buy someone. Hubby will eventually be taken to watch her fulfill her duties and will almost instantly be agreeable to her whoring ways. This happens either by another sex slave screwing him with Eileen's (do sex slaves get to keep their names?) consent or is scared into cooperation by the asswipe that has enough money to play with other lives for amusement. Between the sociopathic billionaire and the demanding whore of a wife I cannot honestly say which character is the most vile. It doesn't really matter since this story/plot is absolutely ridiculous.

On second thought, why not divorce the whore for abandonment. Keep the house, money, reputation and balls while she finds her true calling. At the very least maybe they will let her keep the other three million. He finds someone who knows what fidelity means and she gets to live with her decision (as well as worn body parts, disease, etc.)

Hmm, twenty million dollars...for one year...

She is going to be one worn out woman when she gets home. There's that old navy joke, go in with an arsehole come out with a porthole. Eileen is going to be extensively renovated.

Here's The Deal

You have the makings of an interesting tale. No rating until it's continued.

WOW!!!

While this story does seem like a rewrite. It seems that more and more stories are rewrites as well. Although, the sad ending is predictable, it will still be interesting to see what kind of spin is put on it. There is no way their relationship could survive this. No marriage or relationship could survive this. To ever meet again, would be like two strangers meeting for the first time. But this time he would not impress her enough to win her heart. Good luck.

Ridiculous!

Why would anyone pay that kind of money? There are women out there that actually like to be owned that do it for nothing. And how could any husband even think of doing something like this for money, any amount at all. Like he said, she could be killed. So, we have a husband who sold his wife into slavery with no guarantee she won't be killed.
On top of all that, there is no indication that this story will continue. If not, then this story really sucks! The writing is okay but the premise behind the story is too ridiculous for me and if it stops here it's not even a story. 2*s.

Idiotic

You could "see the glisten of the juices in her now hairless pussy". What a lot of bullshit. I know the story is farfetched but that is just ridiculous. And nobody would pay that much money for a woman. Get real!

Provocative Scenario on multiple levels

The author is keeping this on a fantastic, waking nightmare levels. Good job if you live to hate these kind of tales.

Poorly written

It needs to have an editor who at the very least graduated from high school. Why is it the authors on this site are getting less and less mature?

very interesting

Do you plan to continue the story? If not, will you let others try to continue it?

I liked it - so far

And aI don't know why. It's not realistic. The characters aren't particularly well developed. The writing is fine but not stellar. And yet, for whatever reason, I think its a pretty crisply written beginning of a potentially erotic story. it reminds me of Carpe Diem, which the author never finished. I hope you do add more chapters.

gee

3 million Who cares if she comes back. take the 3 million and disappear yourself. Sell all your own shit and just disappear. the wife will get her 3 million when the year is over so she will not have any complaints. You on the other hand can retire where ever you want. With a different name. And fuck a hundred ladies yourself also within the next year. Want a family. After fucking a few hundred women find one just as beautiful Hide the amount of money you do have. Marry her have your kids and keep your old life covered up. Even if you had family. For 3 million dollars I would change my name and let them think Id died been killed somewhere etc. That amount would keep me happy for a lifetime. The old wife that just sold herself. Look at it as goodbye to bad rubbish. She' now a whore. A very expensive whore yes But still a whore. After being a whore for a whole year I damn sure would not want her back as a wife. So fuck her Thank her for the gift and disappear and find that Polynesian lady that will worship you and give you your 3 or 4 sons and forget the bitch. again 3 million plus selling the house you live in now Gee they make it so easy. I wish I had a wife I could sell for 3 million. LOL I'd be on a south seas island somewhere in less than 3 months fucking and enjoying all the pussy and having a ball till I found that beauty I could have a family with. What a waste of a story. It ended in the first chapter

Uh oh! Finishthedamnstory this one is made for you.

Please do it right.

Conflicted

Completely unrealistic, even with an honest attempt at suspending disbelief. The monetary amount is so high it goes beyond all possibilities, some of the phrasing is poorly done, etc. Yet, I enjoyed the story and want to see it continue. Go figure.

Agree with @nonethewiser...

I agree with @nonethewiser...For now is a different story (not new, in another some tried to sold the honeymoon), but the consequences are still to be seen. However I can't desagree with @anon, because maybe he should take the 3 million and desapear in the world, because his wife arguments were all wrong, he knew it and didn't have the force to make her give up the dumb idea...

I agree with previous remark...

FTDS should do a follow-up chapter about how he dumps the cunt and makes off with his 3 millions.

Author Name

Sorry, but if the author cannot SPELL his OWN 'handle' correctly, it does NOT bode well for the actual story. Interesting premise ... crappy actuation thereof!

3*

how bad

and stupid can a story be you asked just read this crap and some of the idiots that commented on it.

Good start, lets see how you finish this!

Can go a lot of ways, very interested in the continuation of this story.

Very promising!

OK so it sounds a bit like some other stories. How many of you lot out there have actually tried to write something totally original? I don't think it's actually possible to write a story where the writer hasn't grown it from something he's read, seen or experienced. Please don't be put off by the miserable lot, who would be the first to moan when there's nothing for them to read. Oh, and the more fantastic the better.

I'll give you 4stars for now.

Because desperation makes us do insane things. I look forward to reading either the separation or the transition back...or the divorce.

started me thinking...

..Okay, I agree this is not the best quality writing. Obviously a quickie, dashed off on an a moment's inspiration. Fictional story with implausible plotting for grumpy old men too cheap to pay 99cents for their porn.

Then, looking over the multitude of whining commentators, I had a revelation. The trolls demanding the fictional husband abandon his fictional wife and run off with the fictional money HE had not earned.

To deprive the fictional wife who was earning the money on HER back or whatever. Didn't realize so many of you readers were Commies!

Then I was inspired to turn the story around. That the fictional husband enlists in a fictional army and goes off for a year to fight a fictional war.

If the troll commentators could see their own hypocrisy. They are advocating that the fictional wife would be justified in abandoning her far off husband and making a new life for herself.

So far so good

You have got the readers interest, what about a continuation?

That's it?

It's not much of a story endin g that way, but the lack of a chapter # in the title implies this is the one and only chapter -- unless you just don't give a fuck about your own story or this is your way of saying "fuck you" to the readers.

Sequels !

A great start and I take there more chapters to come ! ?

I am wondering if the wife does come does she find her husband has move on with another woman, who he has a child with ! ?

Waiting for the next chapter

Good start to a promising story...

Hope to see more

I'm hoping this is chapter 1 of a longer story.

I am somewhat in agreement with the comment by nonethewiser. The writing is good but not outstanding. The characters aren't really fleshed out enough - perhaps because the piece is just too short. Yet I found it interesting and want to read more.

I agree that the story is unrealistic, but so what. I don't want my erotica to be too realistic - that's boring.

The crazy amounts of money being spent here seems to me to lay the groundwork for a more intriguing story. If someone spends that much for a year's "ownership" of a woman, just what will they expect / demand from her? A lot, I would imagine. I'm hoping to read about just what that might be in future chapters.

I'm also hoping to read about what crazy fears and anxiety run through the husband's head over the course of that year. What will he find out along the way? What will he imagine? How will he cope with that? Will he seriously think about walking away? Or will he figure he could never do as good as he did landing this woman, and he has years invested in his marriage, so he's going to try to hang in there?

And I want to read about not just what the wife goes through, but how she feels about it along the way. Is she having an exciting adventure? Does she worry about hubby, feel guilty about how he must be suffering? Some of all of the above?

yup

you made a mistake, a year of wondering.
Don't make us wait that long for some more!!!

You don't have to wonder

You DID make the biggest mistake of your life. What a bitch to say there was nothing holding her to him. So much for richer or poorer.

the entire story transpires in one statement that is made early in the third paragraph

"....I regularly jerked off to the image of my wife onstage, about to be bid upon"

Personally, I find the idea of selling your wife repugnant.

That said, I am NOT sitting here and saying anything negative about this story, or commenting about the diversity of people's fantasies. In fact, it seems that the moral of this story is meant to illustrate the absolute difference between fantasy and reality. It is always funny to note how many people have a problem with reality in fiction. It is either too much, or too little. But for the purposes of this story, the author goes deeper. Misunderstanding, or underestimating, the realities, can not only border on criminal negligence, but will also DESTROY a pretty good jack-off fantasy. LOL!

I found myself thinking about looking at porn. I am sure that the effects of porn are different for everybody. There is a voyeuristic element to viewing porn, but I think everybody can agree it is not that simple. Even if you have a favorite porn star, in REALITY, you don't know this person, and will never meet them in person. Nor will you ever get the chance to fuck them. Even though porn stars ARE real people, they don't represent real people, because in REALITY, they will never impact on your life in any meaningful way. Once you start putting a real person in the place of that porn star.....be it wife, neighbor lady, coworker, kid's teacher or anyone who DOES have a real impact on your life, I think that is when these fantasies cross the line into a voyeur category, and possibly become more dangerous. The tension created in blurring these lines between fantasy and reality probably DO bring some element to sexual pleasure for some people. But, it remains a common theme in these stories that more often than not, when people turn fantasy into reality, they are grossly unprepared for the consequences.

Here, this guy at least, gets a big payday for participating, although his regret is almost instantaneous. I imagine that this character won't find his dick twitching even a little bit as he relives the horror of "selling" his wife, even though the reality of seeing her upon that stage will be forever burned into his memory.

The idea that this story needs a continuation is ridiculous, once you realize that the author has already made his point, and he did it all in just one page.

However the lives of these two shake out over the next few years is immaterial. It only took one night up in the event box, for the narrator to learn his lesson.

Simple

Take her back, then rent her out. I mean she has already said she wants to be a whore so make a common whore after 9 months sell her for $5 blow jobs, $10 pussy, and $3 anal. At the end of the year dump her worthless ass in dumpster.

Oh any by the way this is almost a direct copy of an earlier story or two.

face the facts

She said:
"There is very little tying me to you and this house."
" I also like some of the finer things in life."

She is going to be with a man rich enough to pay 20 million dollars for a year with her.

She ain't coming back.

REPORTED AS WRONG CATEGORY

PUT DAT CRAP IN SF OR IN YOUR SHITER !

Just Wondering

Did you misspell thief in your name on purpose?

Very intriguing!

A lot of thoughts went through my mind when I read this. Would I have allowed that? If she insisted would I divorce her? Will she be alright? Will I be alright? Many, many questions. Thanks for making me think! five stars!

On the one hand...

This has been done so many ways before, e.g. the Demi / Robert film et cetera. However, the writing is good. Maybe WT can come up with an original twist.

New wife and are going to miss the old one...

Nicely written. Anything that draws out emotions (positive or negative) is good. As for me, I can't imagine a better first wife. She just just paid him 3 million to get rid of her. Another 3 million more should the skank return. I can only imagine the smile on his face the whole way home as he plans dismantling their old lives. A win-win even before the divorce.

Ignore The Trolls - This is a great start to potentially exciting series

I trust it won't be long till Chapter 2!! Horny as hell & unnerving at the same time. Takes good skill to achieve this. And I know this type of story has been done before as some complained. But already I can pick up some different undertones here, just like how the incredibly sexy, complex & yet perplexing Meeting The Master series by Strange Life began. But this is what the best of Literotica is really supposed to be about - not the usual BTB stuff which is about as horny as watching paint dry and sometimes downright nasty (unless it is done with class & skill by someone like Stangstar). Ken

Not as common a topic....

...in this category, but it never fails to disappoint that she holds the marriage and hubby in so little regard and that his IQ drops so far while they 'talk it out'.
If he's real smart, he'll accept that:
1. Troubles notwithstanding, he deserves love and loyalty,
2. Once her determination is made clear, he should accept that he's already lost her,
3. Now aware, he should play it cool, hide the money and disappear with the second installment when (really, if) she returns.
4. Find and fuck as many women as he can while she's gone. Pay a few high end ones to teach him how to make the best of what he's got, because she'll have no problem running him down when he doesn't measure up to the sex gods she fucked hourly for the year she was gone....he should be prepared to move on, but thoroughly enjoy her absence. She'll be having the time of her life and her promises and reassurances are as empty as her heart.
Really, the whole 'she fucks like a bunny while he remains unhappily celibate' makes him a jerk? Really?
Also, her name calling came off as a cheap, selfish manipulation and clearly disdainful of her husband. It looks like they really didn't have much going on in the first place. So I don't get his 'fear of losing her'....he never had her and from the way she acts, she could easily have been fucking around their whole marriage.
If she's as shallow as your writing suggests why wouldn't all the fabulous sexual experience keep her exploring past the end of the contract or 'resubmitting herself' for another year?
If she really did come back, she's now an experienced prostitute with no qualms about fucking whoever she wants. What's he got? Loyalty? Nope. Love? I doubt he ever had that. A good marriage? Phhht! Maybe he's got.....a six million dollar, well used whore and a very empty year (unless he makes smart use of the time and a little of the money)...
Yes, the fantasy elements are exciting to consider, but as soon as we lift eyes from the page and the fantasy fades, the realities make this a very sad story and the wife a very ugly and treacherous human being. Oh....and a well paid and continuously available whore. That's what you want for a wife for however long your sham marriage will last....and that's if she comes back at all??
You did say he worked very hard to win her. She cared so little for him, she could not honor that? People's lives change dramatically all the time. But they do not usually throw each other away so easily. She wants finer things, but can't stick it out until they can find a path forward. Selfish, narcissistic bitch.
Not a recipe for a thriving marriage or even a lasting friendship.

What a GREAT start!

Please continue with this! I love the storyline, and the concept. You have put some thought into this! I can't wait to see how she returns! OR if he has to retrieve her, or whatever you decide!

Hope theres nore

Great story! Lots of ways this could go. Please tell us more.

Anytime I read a comment that begins with......

Ignore the trolls, I automatically give the bum story a 1*. Anytime somebody feels they need to warn the author about the comments, the story can't be any good.

Anytime I see that some jackass has rated a story without reading it, I raise my rating one *.

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Finish it

The story is incomplete please finish it

Would have been a good story starter...

Anytime I see that some jackass has rated a story 5*

just to spite another, I automatically give it a 1* Stick that one up your ass.

Why the category change?

fuck that ho

the check suddenly made that a GREAT idea!