..let's see where you take this.
It seems that both your stories so far intrigue but don't seem to go anywhere. Maybe you are going to continue them both.
Shows promise but will the cult justify the build up?
Thanks for reading all. I am in the midst of writing chapter 2, so stay tuned. Our slave boy may finally get some action. ;)
good job so far, looking forward to the next one.
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Interesting opening...
..let's see where you take this.
It seems that both your stories so far intrigue but don't seem to go anywhere. Maybe you are going to continue them both.
Caught my interest
Shows promise but will the cult justify the build up?
Thanks for reading all. I am in the midst of writing chapter 2, so stay tuned. Our slave boy may finally get some action. ;)
good job so far, looking forward to the next one.
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