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YIPEEE!
Can't read it now, but you have made my day! I check every morning, and here you are. Can't wait to get home from work. Thanks for giving me something to look forward to on hump day!
BRAVO!
Thank you! So enjoying your creativity.
you're back!!!!!
I've been wondering if you'd decided to go on long term hiatus- so glad to see you were able to return (I know RL can keep a person hopping fast to keep up sometimes). The story plot and characters are as engaging as ever, and the length of this chapter is astounding. You'll probably have a whole novel by the time it's finished. Anyways, just wanted to give you the welcome back shout out, and thank you for sharing your work with us here. It's a pleasure to read.
fabulous
hellloooo five stars as always ..... i know it takes time to put together a story such as this and that you have had a busy summer but OMG am I glad your back.... amazing story has taken two days to read ,, OMG i love it this is one of the best i ever read its book quality xxx thank you for your time, attention and keeping all the threasds running and managing to make it all into a believable story YOUR AMAZING XXX
hmmm
Well, I waited daily just like everyone else and I have to be honest with you. I have skimmed through a lot of this one, especially the sex parts and I did not skim on any of your other chapters. Honestly, I know this story is fiction, but sometimes there is a fine line between real and way over the top real. The sex with five men at a time, twice daily or more and suddenly Jessica is not sore at all? Then of course there are the cigarette burns to her labia and they just reach down and begin playing with her and she lets them because there is cream. These two things alone scream "Soap Opera" crap, not real struggles and such. Please don't get me wrong, I will still continue to read your chapters and I really hope there is less skimming needed by me next time.
woo-hoo!!!!
First off, don't listen to negative Nancy there. Second, so happy you are finally back! I literally squealed when I saw the two new chapters!!!! First one is great!!!!
Update by author
Thank you for so much positive feedback. Unfortunately, health and family issues have kept me from writing for a long time. I have made some progress on the sequel but I can not estimate when I will be able to post because so much of my time is not in my control. However, please be assured that more is coming. Take care!
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