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Very good
Very enjoyable, I am looking forward to the next chapter.
More, please?
This story is so great, I wish you could update every day! Can't wait for the happy ending :)
Tara Neale you are a wordmaster.
I love ever line from crying in her beer to chemistry. I particularly like Greywolf's story of resent toward the old woman and fighting in places most people couldn't even find. Please right more.
FF
P.S. Find yourself a copy of the DVD "Beneath Hill 60". Not erotica but a worthy story none the less. One that like your own acknowledges in an understated way that first people fight for people that don't even no them, amongst an amazing tale.
Cheers and Thank You
EXCELLENT
Your story continues to amaze me. "they," -- whoever that is -- say there are no original stories. And while that may be true, yours is certainly fresh. I'll comment further after I read chapters four and five. GREAT SO FAR, THANKS FOR SHARING.
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