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Kharon Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/05/14

I'm sorry but that was awful

The dialogue was stiff as a board and must have been conceived by a ten year old. The attempt at a clever style of writing failed miserably as it simply interfered with the story you were trying to tell. No stars as even giving it one star would be an insult to the star.

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by Anonymous10/14/14

Utter Rubbish

Please for the love of god, don't write anything else.

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by Taunus10/14/14

Love of God

I'm sorry that you don't like my stories. There are other people who do. You have my permission not to read my stories. Just "'Delete without having been read by."

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