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Motherly Love Ch. 02

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by Anonymous10/22/14

Chase is a very lucky lad

Can you imagine the bursting pride of a boy watching his mother's belly getting bigger and bigger with the baby he fucked up her cunt? It's matched only by the pride of his mother. Pride in her virile manly son. Pride in his big pounding cock that always gives her the convulsive cums she craves. And pride in her boy's potent baby-making balls. The gifted author of this series is a young guy, 18 to 22 years old. I bet he was as hard as his hero Chase when he wrote this excellent story and he shot a good healthy load of his own at the end. Mr. I knows where a boy's creamy semen belongs--right up the same cunt he came out of. A boy's penis and his mother's vagina--made for each other.

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by Anonymous10/22/14

i really think i would like to have the next chapter leading up to and including the birth both son and son breastfeeding at the same time u have a great imagination keep it up it rocks my boat

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by kennyboy8210/22/14

definitely need another chapter as a minimum. Chase fucking his slutty Mom as she's about to spawn his bastard child would be Hot. There's more than one hole he could use too!
I love it that he's cuckolding his dim-witted Dad. The guy couldn't boil water, never mind breed his Hotwife! Chase can though! More story please.

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by theilluminaughty10/22/14

Thanks

Having just checked the comments, I see not much but positive feedback. Thank you, readers, for commenting, and keep doing so! I love to have some suggestion on where I should guide the story. The story which, I can tell you, will have at least one more chapter. I hope I don't take too long to write it, it should be out well before Thanksgiving but I can't make any promises. I'll be fast-forwarding again, maybe to 7 or 8 months. I might hold off on the birth until chapter 4.

I'm also venturing out of my comfort zone a little, I really liked writing this, so expect some more of the straight erotica that I write so little of to come soon in a different story. I hope you guys like what I'm writing, and tell me if you do!

More to come,
The Illuminaughty

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by Anonymous10/22/14

keep the chapters coming 5 stars

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by redlion7510/23/14

as long as he isn't ass fucking his mom when her water breaks I am good with reading more,but longer chapters.

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by sabra1602310/23/14

Need More

This story calls for more. Thanks

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by lone_wolf71610/27/14

More

Do not skip over any part........

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by Anonymous11/22/14

i would really like a new part

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by theilluminaughty11/26/14

Sorry

A new chapter is in the works. It has been for a while. I just want some plot advancement to happen, so I have to spend a little less time writing the erotica part of the scene and a little more on the more developmental story components. I'm hitting a wall a little bit here, so please be patient. The new chapter will probably be out well before Christmas, but I can't make promises.

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