by Tara Cox
LOLOLOLOL...what did he expect with no prep....lolololol!!!!!!!!!!!
funny and sexy and different.
a good read , well done good story telling with vivid descriptions making me see and feel the story . thanks for posting .
But the good news? After reading a few of your stories I finally realized you aren't going to get any better and I don't have to waste any more time reading the complete and utter drivel you write. This story, like many of your others was terrible. Badly conceived, poorly written with truly horrible dialogue. I'm not sure even a great editor could save you.
that all negative comments are written by Anonymous?
who is he/she and why does he/she hate everything with such passion?
A true opinion wouldn't be so mean spirited and insulting.
Also would perhaps leave some constructive criticism not just spew insults.
Then maybe you could show some balls and show your name.
You probably didn't understand that "aplomb" means, "complete and confident composure or self-assurance." That's when I stopped reading.
Loved your story. Love butts, cheeks, cracks, and especially the butt hole. It's the most sensual part of the body. Love the smells, the softness and the tastes.
Please keep writing!
Great ending. I have rarely laughed as hard. I see the players in my head from my group of friends and know a few of each. Thanks for a pleasurable tale that I waited nearly 6 years to read.