Hot story. But the Team Captain is a misogynist dick. It's hard to cheer for him. I would like to see Beverly get revenge, by putting him in a situation similar to the one where he used his mother. I want to see him helpless, getting used by a crew of women. I would especially love it, if that involved him get pegged by his sister, Clarissa!
SSL I'm a fan of your work and normally enjoy most of it. But this, you can do better than this. It seems like when it comes to the contest you decide to go with quantity over quality. This is what I would expect from a first time or newer author here who with a bit of polish and be a good author, but not something from one of the best authors on the whole sight.
I like Incest/Taboo and Non-Con, not to mention flawed characters, so I've been trying to figure out why I wanted a piano to drop on you main character so much from the first paragraph of your story through the last. If your aim was to capture the voice of the ultimate repellant douchebag, you absolutely did and it was very effective and well done.
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Anonymous10/08/14
Awesome Story
Obviously not everyone's cup of tea, but I love stories where you have a believable alpha male dominating the women around him. This is one of those stories.
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Anonymous11/02/14
We're these comments written by your buddies ?
This was just another mum gets screwed by son at a gangbang story, the type of story I like BUT this has no original elements and isn't even well written! Sorry not much positive to say.
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Anonymous11/12/14
Two Losers
This is a story about two losers -- a degenerate mom, and an equally degenerate and unsympathetic son.
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Anonymous11/20/14
Love this great story
If you don't like it u don't like great erotic stories.
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Anonymous01/12/15
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Horseshit...
The son should beat the living shit out of that kid, bad enough to end his hockey playing days...
Some of you may know us: we are 19 yo twins who have been fucking daddy since we were 15. We think the story is great although we don't have any experience that can compare. We have been gang banged several times, once by my boyfriends baseball team but everybody knew it was us unlike here. What my sister and I would really like to read is a story about a MILF, stripped naked, on her knees, in the men's bathroom of a high school football team. We've been in a few and they are nasty! She would be taking all 45 guys either in her mouth, her ass, or her cunt. She too would be blindfolded. Each boy would have to decide which hole he wanted to fuck. A lot of the guys would be young and perhaps this would take the V off their chests. After she took 45 loads of cum somewhere in her body, she could get up and led to her car still naked. Her clothes would be a new gym bag they gave her. The author could decide who should was married to and which hole her son fucked. Maybe three of her sons were on the team. You decide! Any suggestions from the readers? Love you all!
If you were a slutty mom, maybe you would understand the lady/mom involved. I have been a slut for my Husband ....and son for years, I love it, she will too. Who are you to condemn? You read the story, you masturbated to the story.........and you say she is a slut? LOL Get over it and be honest for once.
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Anonymous07/09/15
MOMMIE slut delivers hot and insatiable sex for all cummers.
Making her son jealous by fucking his friends was so naughty. Mommy slut so needy for yummy hot cum . Deeply in her tight ass, sweet wet cunt, and gooey slick spermy dripping dorn her "FUCK ME" MOUTH. EVENTUALLY ENDING UP GETTING FUCK GOOD BY YOUNG LESBIANS WITH STRAP ON COCKS !
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Anonymous06/09/16
Role Play...
A milf at the party..... and the guys talk about how they'd like to F their mothers and start calling her mom, and she kind of has to talk dirty to her kid. You'd love for your son to fuck you don't you. You know he's been whacking off thinking about you huh mom? Say it mom, tell me how much you'd like me, him, us, to fuck you....them not knowing it was his mom all the while.
English
Always awesome!
You write the best stories!
Another very good story SSS. This is definitly the winner!!!!
S
Thanks a lot
I read this in a waiting room now I need to find a way to hide this hardon. 5 stars.
good story
I especially liked the phone call with sis while she was being ass fucked. maybe the phone never hung up and sis heard the whole thing!
great story
Mom was great. Now you need to add your sister and Mom for a threesome
Typically Great SSL Story
Great, as usual. SSL has a nack to combine the erotic and kinky together in great stories. Keep up the great work!
Really a Hot Story !!!
Really hot story well thought out and written very well,would love to be in mom's place my self for sure.
I want to see revenge
Hot story. But the Team Captain is a misogynist dick. It's hard to cheer for him. I would like to see Beverly get revenge, by putting him in a situation similar to the one where he used his mother. I want to see him helpless, getting used by a crew of women. I would especially love it, if that involved him get pegged by his sister, Clarissa!
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Hockey boy fucks mom's stinky asshole!
Lots of potential
This is a good quick story. There is a lot of potential here for many more chapters. I hope you will explore them.
yum!
Time for gloryhole partieS.
great story
loved it...hope it wins...
SSL I'm a fan of your work and normally enjoy most of it. But this, you can do better than this. It seems like when it comes to the contest you decide to go with quantity over quality. This is what I would expect from a first time or newer author here who with a bit of polish and be a good author, but not something from one of the best authors on the whole sight.
Strong voice for unlikable narrator
I like Incest/Taboo and Non-Con, not to mention flawed characters, so I've been trying to figure out why I wanted a piano to drop on you main character so much from the first paragraph of your story through the last. If your aim was to capture the voice of the ultimate repellant douchebag, you absolutely did and it was very effective and well done.
Awesome Story
Obviously not everyone's cup of tea, but I love stories where you have a believable alpha male dominating the women around him. This is one of those stories.
We're these comments written by your buddies ?
This was just another mum gets screwed by son at a gangbang story, the type of story I like BUT this has no original elements and isn't even well written! Sorry not much positive to say.
Two Losers
This is a story about two losers -- a degenerate mom, and an equally degenerate and unsympathetic son.
Love this great story
If you don't like it u don't like great erotic stories.
...
Horseshit...
The son should beat the living shit out of that kid, bad enough to end his hockey playing days...
We liked it
Some of you may know us: we are 19 yo twins who have been fucking daddy since we were 15. We think the story is great although we don't have any experience that can compare. We have been gang banged several times, once by my boyfriends baseball team but everybody knew it was us unlike here. What my sister and I would really like to read is a story about a MILF, stripped naked, on her knees, in the men's bathroom of a high school football team. We've been in a few and they are nasty! She would be taking all 45 guys either in her mouth, her ass, or her cunt. She too would be blindfolded. Each boy would have to decide which hole he wanted to fuck. A lot of the guys would be young and perhaps this would take the V off their chests. After she took 45 loads of cum somewhere in her body, she could get up and led to her car still naked. Her clothes would be a new gym bag they gave her. The author could decide who should was married to and which hole her son fucked. Maybe three of her sons were on the team. You decide! Any suggestions from the readers? Love you all!
Whoa....all the anger against the slutty mom?
If you were a slutty mom, maybe you would understand the lady/mom involved. I have been a slut for my Husband ....and son for years, I love it, she will too. Who are you to condemn? You read the story, you masturbated to the story.........and you say she is a slut? LOL Get over it and be honest for once.
MOMMIE slut delivers hot and insatiable sex for all cummers.
Making her son jealous by fucking his friends was so naughty. Mommy slut so needy for yummy hot cum . Deeply in her tight ass, sweet wet cunt, and gooey slick spermy dripping dorn her "FUCK ME" MOUTH. EVENTUALLY ENDING UP GETTING FUCK GOOD BY YOUNG LESBIANS WITH STRAP ON COCKS !
Role Play...
A milf at the party..... and the guys talk about how they'd like to F their mothers and start calling her mom, and she kind of has to talk dirty to her kid. You'd love for your son to fuck you don't you. You know he's been whacking off thinking about you huh mom? Say it mom, tell me how much you'd like me, him, us, to fuck you....them not knowing it was his mom all the while.
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