Very nice fantasy; right out of my own sensual thoughts.
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Very nice fantasy; right out of my own sensual thoughts.
What a wonderfully fun story. I love your style. I bibliographicql note also caught my attention. It opened a door to Ssssh.com to me. I am looking forward to read more of your short stories and admire your courage. I posted two stories and received a lot of supportive feedback, but also some real discussing anonymous comments. I wish I didn't let it bother me, but it did and therefore I refrained from any more posting. Your confident air may have given me the little boost I needed. Thanks for making a difference to me. Charlotte
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