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by Anonymous10/05/14

Suggestion

I have an idea for your story, make their conscious aware of what's going on but make it so that they are helpless to do anything about it.

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by C_frommn10/06/14

Nice Start

It would be Nice if he could over write their wants with his and they know its going on but unable to stop. and as they continue having Sex with him they Become his.

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