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Interested to see where this goes
Not a bad start, but it was rather sudden. It would be interesting in future chapters to learn more about Anna. Looking forward to more.
The
author needs urgent and serious psychiatric treatment!
Not as good as I thought
The writing was good but it didn't show any sexual excitement. It just told of a man controlling a woman, but not sexually. If they did something sexually adventurous then it would be something to talk about. But all he did was sit her in front of a mirror and look at herself and give her several orders on why she is a slave and who does she serve.
Needs more combination of hypnosis and erotica.
Goiod start
Hope you continue to develop this character, looking forward to the next chapter.
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