Well Lyle can't blame Jenny for leaving him if his job is his first love. A neglected spouse only invites trouble, although Jenny should've said something a while ago. And to cheat with the best friend was another slap in the face.
So...how does one become a professional vampire hunter? I guess now he'll get divorced and quit his day job. This could have been very funny as well if you'd developed it more.
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Revenge
Please continue with a follow up. I would like to see him again.
Nice nice :)
I liked it, it's pretty good stuff, i would love to see more of it.
Good story
Love the ending. Just... poetic.
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Well Lyle can't blame Jenny for leaving him if his job is his first love. A neglected spouse only invites trouble, although Jenny should've said something a while ago. And to cheat with the best friend was another slap in the face.
Interesting direction, wanted more.
So...how does one become a professional vampire hunter? I guess now he'll get divorced and quit his day job. This could have been very funny as well if you'd developed it more.
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