I have the Power Ch. 01

Power corrupts

I think you need to rethink your plot. The rapist in this story of course needs somebody to come after him. I hope if any other parts come, we will find him being tracked down and handled.
Also while I don't appreciate your effort doesn't mean you should not continue this plot. I'd like to see where you take it and how it concludes.

pregnant?

He might be powerful, but making her pregnant from cumming in her mouth? That is a lil far fetched

... I don't get it. Is this supposed to be a metaphor for Prince Adam's struggle against Skeletor? I guess I can maybe buy that the Power of Greyskull could get someone pregnant, but the rest of it is just confusing. :P

Biology 101 Fail

How exactly does one become pregnant from a blow job? You need to brush up on how sexual reproduction works and then edit the story.