All Comments on 'An Incubus' Treat for a Treat'

by kendraskye

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
MAKE MOREEEEEE :D

MORE PLEASE THAT WAS SO AWESOME

stlgoddessfreyastlgoddessfreyaover 9 years ago
Good voice for your narrator, but...

...your demon lord talks just like a regular guy in a porno. Made a really weird contrast for me from the fantasy elements, rather than making them part of the story.

cupid69cupid69over 9 years ago
Loved it!

I really enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing with us.

BoldVultureBoldVultureover 9 years ago
I got to the end so one star.

See title.

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