MORE PLEASE THAT WAS SO AWESOME
Thanks :)
...your demon lord talks just like a regular guy in a porno. Made a really weird contrast for me from the fantasy elements, rather than making them part of the story.
I really enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing with us.
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MAKE MOREEEEEE :D
MORE PLEASE THAT WAS SO AWESOME
Thanks :)
Good voice for your narrator, but...
...your demon lord talks just like a regular guy in a porno. Made a really weird contrast for me from the fantasy elements, rather than making them part of the story.
Loved it!
I really enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing with us.
I got to the end so one star.
See title.
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