Getting our interest early on, building to the inevitable "gotcha" conclusion.
To those who might ask "he didn't recognize his niece?" I offer my own thoughts having just seen a picture of my youngest niece, whom I haven't seen in some years - "yes, its possible."
Unlike Gordon in the story, despite my longtime lust for my niece, I am not likely to have the same conclusion except in my private fantasy moments. Great job, Brett.
This was a wonderful story Brett. This was the first story that I have read in over three months. Thank you for writing the story never stop you are a talented writer.
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This was a pretty interesting story. I think you should continue it. We need more of this story.
continue so we can find out what happens
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It was only a tease!
Would you write more of this uncle and neice?
Please?
Another fine story from Brett
Getting our interest early on, building to the inevitable "gotcha" conclusion.
To those who might ask "he didn't recognize his niece?" I offer my own thoughts having just seen a picture of my youngest niece, whom I haven't seen in some years - "yes, its possible."
Unlike Gordon in the story, despite my longtime lust for my niece, I am not likely to have the same conclusion except in my private fantasy moments. Great job, Brett.
This was a wonderful story Brett. This was the first story that I have read in over three months. Thank you for writing the story never stop you are a talented writer.
Great stuff
Write more, we need to know what happens next.
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