Undercover Sister

Spoiled by Anal Sex

It was becoming interesting until he used the wrong hole.

I agree with the last commenter

Stephanie has a perfectly good, indeed a most adorable little coochie. It's the one her brother's been munching on for quite a while. If he's going to give his sister a hot incestuous fuck, stick his fat cock up between her legs and blow his brotherly balls, it should be up his sister's pretty little twat.

For the amount of backstory you had to read, there should have been more sex. Just sayin.

Nice Job

Great story! Is this going to be an adventure series of our two heroes?

Epic shit!

Dude, that was just fucking epic! I was so scared that you were gonna turn this into a "Oh my god we've been caught" and have their incest experience in a locked away dungeon.

and fuck, the anal part was the BEST

Yummy!!!

Love all your work.

ThankYouVeryMuch!

predicable but well done

i enjoy a story which culminates in the un realized. So for me the story was grand in that there was no desires from either sibling previous to their forced tryst. You did a good job for the most part of suspension of disbelief. However, some hinge points lacked attention. Such as when she informed him of her required nudity, there wasn't a discussion of concealment of device. Seems to me given the in depth description of his installation of the device within her bra that you missed an plot point of her stashing a device on him.

excellent

That was an amazing story . Loved it

Loved it .

Very good story had an awesome build up and great ending . Adding this one to my favorite list . thanks .....

excellent

That was an amazing story . Loved it

Why the wire?

What was the purpose of practicing to put the wire in her bra when she was to be naked?

Liked the plot, thought the end was lacking something.

You built an easy, friendly relationship between the brother and his sister through good dialogue in the beginning and had an original idea to bring them together in a sexually-charged situation, but it seemed like you rushed to get her naked and them having sex. They went from a risky plan of her wearing a wire (which I thought was a great way to build up sexual tension between them) to just planting a device. Why...didn't they just plant the device in the first place? Or have him wear it and get stuck having to perform in the smaller room right in front of the Mayor and his guards where the chances of getting caught were much higher, so they couldn't possibly fake their way out of it? I think that was a missed opportunity. I also though the scene where they were both in their masks at his house was more erotic than the end, because it was unexpected and seemed to actually push their boundaries.

hot hot hot 5 stars and another chapter

Sequel needed

Next time have her on the pill and let her brother fuck her pussy.

Great!

Hot as hell! Awesome writing! Please write more about this duo!

Tsk Tsk

i see others didn't fully understand it. When they practiced with her putting the wire on they did not know she had to be naked nor did they plan on her wearing it. They figure the best way to hide it until they could plant it was in her bra.

Good

Loved the story until it got to the anal sex. What is the fixation about it????

More

Good stories call for more than one chapter. Waiting for more. Thanks

Nice

i want to fuck my sister and i know she want to fuck me but all she do is looks at my boner that i have for her. I know your looking at it just ask me to eat your pussy i'm craving your taste im serious and you know it.Your panties smell so sweet and taste so good to me.. i wanna be between your thighs.. Let Me. And make your move you;)

Don't end it here!

This could be a wonderful novella or at the very least, a multi chapter story.

Very good

Great story!

Really good story!

Liked this one and would love to see more adventures!

Well done

That was hot and one of the better reasons i've found to have to screw your sister. Keep up the good work. I think u have a good start to a series.

Very well done.

You earned 5 stars. It is still hard to belive this really happened. It could be a possible? Maybe !!

Excellent!

Great story. Great detail. Hot!

Very Creative

nicely written, very creative story! I'm sure there could be further adventures

Loved it !

More please ! You could spend more time and details on the sex, but otherwise don't change a thing.

ooooooohh!

Yep! I just jizzed. Mmmmm I guess that means a score of five and obviously well written. You've made a man happy and now I shall get some sleep. Thankyou.

Brother & Sister gave their all for the story !

Great story ! And loved the way it was set up Keep the stories cumming and cumming and cumming and cumming ! I know I did several times and as I write this Im ready to cum again ! I hope you do another story like this again .And she really got more more then what she thought shed get in doing the story and it seems that they both enjoyed the experience and had a great time as well. Thanks so much

GREAT STORY!

Great story! I really enjoyed it! Great buildup! I really wish there were more stories like this. I hope someday to read a part 2!

Hot, hot, hot.

A great story. I would have liked to hear that she had been on the pill and wanted him to ravage her tight little cunt, and shoot his cum deep inside her for the first time.