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by Anonymous

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by pelegrino10/06/14

Nice photo, Mag, I like watching it!
5ed

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by todski2810/07/14

not bad

The ending is really good subtle and a little ambiguous can be read in a couple of ways 5

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by Magnetron10/09/14

@ todski and pelegrino

Thanks. I actually pitched this one into the delete bin many years ago. What you read was my best recollection of the original with some improvisation.

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