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by Anonymous

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by 63lsmith10/06/14

LOVED/HATED

Loved the story until the end, hated the way this chapter ended. Hopefully you will correct it in a future chapter.

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by Kethandra10/10/14

The end disappointed after great build up

You worked background family history and internal conflict into a one page story without having a jarring background tell-all paragraph stuffed into it. That's impressive. I really enjoyed it and gay male is not my usual read.
The only disappointment was the end. If you're letting a guy in a dark cloak named Damon take you through a series of ever greater temptations, being on a downward spiral is not much of a revelation.

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