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by Harryin VA10/06/14

this is rape

pure and simple. Even worse author you lied. This was forced sexual assault and the premise was that the other gut would not use force

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by swingerjoe10/06/14

Re. "This is rape"

No, it's fantasy. Fictional fantasy. I'm certain that no fictional characters were harmed in this story. And this is the "Non-Consent" category, after all. What did you expect?

As for the story itself, I couldn't get past the overdone plot device where this husband watches all the action from a security camera feed, and listens to a state of the art speaker system that he has installed solely for this purpose. Why not write the story from a third-person perspective and eliminate that device altogether? Or come up with a unique way for hubby to watch and listen?

Three stars from me. It is neither the best nor worst tale I've read today.

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by satinlvr_mwf10/06/14

Very nicely told

I liked this. Good narrative, mostly believable concept. A far cry from most stories in this genre. This is a nicely worded fantasy, and the characters were certainly believable and credible. Please keep writing!

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by Phil_Patsfan10/06/14

I would never allow that to happen

What kind of asshole allows that to happen to his wife?

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by chytown10/07/14

It's***

A read.

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by arch3r10/07/14

Loved it!

Please continue this story with more encounters between Joy and Scott!! Wish this story was longer

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by hornyman16910/07/14

Follow up

You ended the story in the middle. What did Joy tell her husband? Did she call the police? Did the husband save the video? These are just three of the many unanswered questions. The story has so many paths to follow.

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by impo_5810/08/14

Agree with @Phil_Patsfan

Only a retard would have accept the deal...A normal man would have beat the shit out of the SOB as soon as he made the proposal...

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by honeylicker112410/08/14

Another excellent story

Cleo, I've enjoyed the stories you have posted, and have told you so. I like that this one was not in the "clinical" setting of counseling and writing it out as therapy. I read a few years back that the brain is the most important sex organ of the body. You demonstrate that in your excellent description of the persons involved, circumstances, and most of all the sex itself. I love having a story play out in my mind like a DVD, where I can see the juices, smell them, and hear them as they are pulled from the cunt. You do that. Will quickly read ch. 2. and hopefully this will be more than a two part series. 5 *'s on the erection meter.

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by MrReasonable10/10/14

impo-58 please stop your stupid comments!

you are an idiot!
This story is great from start to finish 5 !

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by Mangudai7110/14/14

Great !!!! Thanks !!

I have found so few stories like this, when wife is seduced fighting against her vows, I would like she would be more reluctant and with each encounter go a little more further and deeper, discovering her own desires without left the conflicting with her faithfullness and family.

I will appreciate if you write more stories like this, great work, thanks for your great stories.

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by crickette12/02/14

I loved it.

So many feelings with her submission and you captured it well. 5

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by Chagrined12/22/14

Confused

I don't know it the story is great or not, but I am confused about a something - obviously there is something very wrong with me. You see, years ago I saw my wife fucking this guy. I didn't get hard, I didn't turn away meekly and slink off. I wasn't excited, just the opposite in fact. My reaction was to beat the shit out of them both. (I had a very sympathetic judge so I don't go to jail but I did get both a divorce and a severe talking to ). Oh, I got the kids. :) All grown and doing quite well, thank you.

So, am I weird for not having gotten off on seeing my wife fuck another guy?

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by viciouswomanbeater12/26/14

EXCELLENT

I loved this story.
very well written, and you captured all of the emotions that she was going through

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