The length dude... waaaaaaayy too short!!!
add more to each chapter write another
Its ok if the chapter is short as long as he keeps writing. I hate it when there is a good story but the author just suddenly stops. Dont mind the comments on length just keep writing.
for a chapter.
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Aww c'mon man!!
The length dude... waaaaaaayy too short!!!
add more to each chapter write another
Its ok if the chapter is short as long as he keeps writing. I hate it when there is a good story but the author just suddenly stops. Dont mind the comments on length just keep writing.
that was a nice outline
for a chapter.
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