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Was holding back . . .
my comments until I had read all of your installments, but realized I needed to let you know that this is one of your best stories ever.
You amaze me with your writing skills - your ability to hold my interest - all of your reader's interest throughout the installments. Seldom is it likely that once a reader begins one of your stories do they ever drop their interest and not finish following through to the last chapter.
I know I'm prejudiced, but I still hold you above all the rest of the authors on this site.
Keep them coming (pun intended!).
still no no no no
perhaps you will find a way to do this story yet. oh by the way, after reading 2, and now this one, which is chapter 4 - where is 3? did it become tired of waiting?
Ok, just ugh...
I'm sorry, but nothing in this story makes sense. What kind of woman goes from saying her man is a selfish prick (which he is), to being starry eyed over having what will probably be terrible sex with him. I just can't stand the whole "He's going to change into a totally different person after I bang him" thing. I really hope nobody is actually this idiotic. Pressuring a woman for sex is not being a man, that's being a bratty child who throws a temper tantrum for not getting what he wants. It's so sad to me how many people think this is normal, much less acceptable, behavior.
Secondly, why is it that in chapter 2 she complains endlessly about this guy not even bothering to get her off, but in this chapter he apparently does it quite a bit. The timeline in this story is just so inconsistent, it is hard to follow.
I guess this story is just really not my cup of tea. It's just to hard to follow, and all of the characters are SO whiny. Plus the fact that we are 4 chapters in and NOTHING even remotely sexy has happened besides her masturbating with toys that have painfully awkward names. So yea, I think i'm going to be done with this one.
Virgin engaging in a lot of "everything...but"
I like how Jessica and Michael had done everything short of penetration.
I sooo wanna read what it's like for the innocent virgin so nervous about losing her virginity.
While she hasn't let him penetrate her, I wonder if she's let him mount her & engage in "simulated sex," where he rubs his hard, hungry cock up against her "innocent" bushy cunt.
Rubbing up against her sexy pussy, however, gets to be too much for both them and she's enjoyed the feeling of his warm, spermy cum shooting over her tummy. One time, when he titty-fucked her, his cum shot all over that cross necklace she always wears.
The feelings would likely get to her as he notices how wet her pussy lips are.
Any normal man would sneakily slide it into her, and she likely wouldn't resist.
However, Michael did "promise" not to enter her and he honored the Christian woman's determination.
I get her promise to her grandma, but am curious if there were other motivations for her to preserve her innocence.
It would be great to read about when Michael penetrates her & finally gets to burst her innocent hymen, which she wants to give him.
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