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One Day...And the Next

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by Welshdreamer4210/08/14

Well said

We lose track of what's important sometimes don't we? Beautifully written poem with a message I couldn't agree more on x

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by todski2810/08/14

As always

Old bear your contrast is perfect and highlights the real important things in life. 5 ed your writing had developed from strength to strength. Been really good to watch!

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by Trixareforkids10/08/14

Shifting priorities

Nicely represented.

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by JWren10/09/14

Time to breathe and smell the roses. Wonderful!

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