All Comments on 'Anticipation'

Of everything you have written, this one is the BEST!!!

I like this story a lot and I like a lot of your stories, I've read most of them. The only thing I don't care for (mainly because of just my personal preference) is that on any of your stories that include rape or force, the stories are too soft. Like, the girl isn't really against the rape, she isn't trying to fight back. Other than that, I truly enjoy your stories.

Your stories are a treat to read, but there are occasional minor faults which an editor or proofreader could prevent, for example in this story ‘of’ is used in a context where ‘off’ is correct. I wonder if perhaps English is not your native language.