Here is a constructive advice. Take your time, this is not a sprint. No chit chat, no dialogue... it was like she was a prostitute. Have them resist their urges, have them be a little hesitant to give in.
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Anonymous10/07/14
Manners!
You don't take hold of her head and force your cock down her throat. If she is being nice enough to supply a blow job, let her do it the way she wants to. That piece of shitty behaviour spoiled an otherwise moderately entertaining if highly unlikely story.
What causes the need to get in the sack? Glances, certain conversation, accidental touches, a game during swimming or other activity can give the reader a purpose for the resulting activity. Even a tension or past memory can do the same. Between relatives, a focus on a little tension over someone finding out could be useful.
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Take your time, stay awhile
Here is a constructive advice. Take your time, this is not a sprint. No chit chat, no dialogue... it was like she was a prostitute. Have them resist their urges, have them be a little hesitant to give in.
Manners!
You don't take hold of her head and force your cock down her throat. If she is being nice enough to supply a blow job, let her do it the way she wants to. That piece of shitty behaviour spoiled an otherwise moderately entertaining if highly unlikely story.
find a way to build up to it.
What causes the need to get in the sack? Glances, certain conversation, accidental touches, a game during swimming or other activity can give the reader a purpose for the resulting activity. Even a tension or past memory can do the same. Between relatives, a focus on a little tension over someone finding out could be useful.
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