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This should but shouldn't be a film.
This is the best story I've read on this site so far, it made me laugh, it made me cry, it made me quite horny for most of the 'scenes' portrayed in the story-and in my opinion it was also a little educational. This should be a film, but it shouldn't because filmmakers nowadays just mess up good stories like this. It's better for the reader to use their own imagination instead of seeing someone else's idea of it. I love this story. I implore you to keep on writing.
Just spellbinding
Lately I've been getting more into the horror part of erotic horror, and trying to skip out on the sex scenes, I'm not sure why. But this made me feel desire, it made me fall in love with the characters. Zafira, who had committed so many atrocities was ana amazing character, captivating, beautiful and rich in dimension. I would go on, but this has inspired me to pick up a pen and start writing. To create someone like Cole, who is giving and beautiful. You are an inspiration to us all.
On another note if you diminish the sex scenes and fill out the story more this would be a great novel.
well written
I enjoyed it. I really liked how you used characters from dexter.
Where is it?
This is AMAZING! All I have to ask is... Where is the rest of it?! XD There HAS to be more somewhere! :P
Awesome.
Don't want to sound like an ass but I'm pretty sure there were errors here and there. Spelling, lacking periods and comas, etC. An amazing read nonetheless. Awesome story and i could not stop reading till i finished it. Interesting from start to end and would have loved more of it. And did i mention it was awesome? :)
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