Purely Sinful

Yay! It's finally up.

I eagerly awaited the appearance of this story and it's here at last. It was a treat to read this as a reader and not as an editor. Despite its length, the pages fly by and I am once again engrossed in the plot and characters. Surprising, how it held my interest a second time 'round.

The sex scenes were deliciously laid out and oh so satisfyingly executed. A toast and a salute to your effort. Keep it up.

Wow

That was fantastic. I really can't properly express just how amazing this story was.
Just... Wow.

Amazing!

An excellent tale. I was utterly captivated. Thanks very much.

Like everyone else, I thoroughly enjoyed this tale. I don't normally read this genre but the title & synopsis looked interesting - I'm glad I took the time to read it. Excellent character development, enough twists and turns to keep you interested, and I didn't see the ending coming. Very good read.

It can be done!

Despite some naysaying in the Halloween Contest support thread, I just wanted to let you know that I *did* read this all in one go. Took me about 4 hours, but still. ;)
Normally I pass on succubus stories because I just seem to keep finding the cliche and boring ones, but this was great! Very thorough and involved, action keeps moving foreward. I liked that the momentum of the plot didn't stop once he discovered his wife's killer (the expected ending place), but kept right on going, further and further down the rabbit hole. Plus, I'm a sucker for angel/demon/biblical themes, so that didn't hurt, either. If this doesn't win the contest there is no justice in the world. Great work!

movie

This is worthy of a movie. Excellent.

Wonderful

I, too, read it all in one sitting. It is far and away the best thing I've read on Literotica, and as a longtime fan of fantasy I say that it is one of the best stories I've read in a long time.

Congratulations!

Absolutely awesome!

Great read, the best I've seen in 10 years of reading here! Keep it up, you are an amazing writer!

Delicious

Much like a high quality beef steak, I took a bite, chewed for a while, cut off another piece, and savored each additional bite. The story held together well, with enough complexity to be continuously interesting without becoming so obscure that I got confused or lost interest. Well done.
On minor points, I wondered if Cole had any family, because only his wife was mentioned. He seemed solid, but without the deep connection to family or others that would allow him to be solid. Obviously the absence of connection made it easier for him to leave everything behind at the end.
I loved the way Cole's mutual love with Zafira was developed. It was gentle, and gradual, and seemed totally natural.
I wondered why Zahira gave Cole more than one drop of Incubus essence if more than one drop was dangerous.
Cole drove his car to Purgatory, and then took a portal home. Then without needing to recover his car, it was available to go to the cemetery.
The short side-story related to Penny was closed, but I felt somewhat dissatisfied with her resolution. It might have been nice had she met someone after her change in everyday dress.
Zahira shows up at Willis Tower in what seems like a wedding gown. If marriage is not possible for a demon or succubus, soul binding seems appropriate, even without officiating clergy. Cole was ready, although it was more immediate elopement than engagement. Obviously such a mixed union would create problems, so one of them needed to change. I wondered whether Zahira would be changed to something other than a demon by Cole's purity. Alternately, Zahira seemed to be grooming Cole to become an Incubus, so I could see things going that direction also.
The final arrival of Asmodeus and Zahira's revelation that she seduced him into coming into her trap caught me totally by surprise. The little girl was a risky, almost over the top fantasy escalation, but I think it worked.
Thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful piece.

Wow

Wow.. Just, wow. I have never been so blown away by such an amazing love story. If your further contributions are half as good as this masterpiece, I will be very happy. Thank you.

Read This Story now!

Well crafted, erotic, spooky, spunky, female led adventure. Who wouldn't want a Zafira????? Then there is the tail!!!! Read it, it's perfect for Haloween!

you just became one of my fave writers here, next to MEH :D awesome job

amazing

I was rivited. The best story I have ever read in literotica

redstate64@yahoo.com

Truly fantastic!

I have little to add to the analysis and comments by soaker. It is a tribute to the writing skill that as the story went on, the sex mattered less and the characters and plot "held me" and kept me reading. In most Literotica entries, the sex is central and the story almost incidental, but in "Purely Sinful" the sex was integral but very much in the service of a larger purpose and vision. A rewarding "read", on par with many of the best things I have found here.

heh heh

See, I *told* you that you'd knock;em dead!

Purely Sin

Best story to date I have read

Should be illustrated

Best story ever, all I need is some great artist like Manara to illustrate it

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Well Done

This is one of the best stories on this site.

Abandoned all other

stories. Seriously, one of the best. Thank you.

Wow

Simply amazing, this was a lot more than a sex story Maybe a Part 2??? PLEASE? Lol

Very Well Done

I enjoyed this from beginning to end!

Thank You!

More please! I loved this story from start to finish -, wonderful characters, great story line which is so much more than just a sexy jaunt and tobe honest I wasn't totally convinced that it would all end well. Now we need to see the thread that was hidden from Anariel! Lol!

Outstanding

Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop. I hope to see more.

Wow!

I must say this might actually be the best story I've ever read. Please write more. Also, proof read again as they are still some spelling mistakes and missing spaces before italicized words.

Amazing

Simply amazing. That is a great story.

HOLY SHIT

That was the most amazing story ever! Write more!!! Please!!!

Brilliant!!!

One of the best I have read for a while... nice length too! (I hate it when they are too short)

overwhelmingly awesome

this was one the best stories I've ever read

Just wow... couldn't stop reading it!

An excellent story

This was a wonderfully balanced story. It reminds me heavily of the movies Constantine and Legion. It also reminds me of one of my all time favorite books "On a Pale Horse" by Piers Anthony. If you haven't read that Roz you should. The series Incarnations of immortality is very much like your aspects, and the eternal battle is there. I would say, don't make a sequel because this is delicious as it is.

wow

wow, this was great, liked the romance, and liked that it was so long, enjoyed reading it very much

wow incredible

you have stepped up the game.

Awesome!!!

Soon to be a major motion picture!
Best story I've read on this site....by far!!!!

Fantastic

You are very talented ... I would certainly buy your books

Excellent story!

Very rarely do stories catch my eye like this one. Everything about it was perfect; if Hollywood made an adult-themed major motion picture, this would be one of the first - and best. Another rare thing is that I didn't care for the sex as I did the characters. The ability to create attachment between reader and character is a rare one, and you have done it perfectly. The saddest part is that I'll never experience reading it for the first time again.

Feedback Thread

I have made a thread on the forums where I'd like to discuss any additional feedback that readers may have. Also in the thread you can see my responses to many of the comments made here as well as in other places. You can find the thread here:

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1 104011

Thank you all for reading Purely Sinful and I hope to see you all there :)

Wow!

This is by far the best work I have ever read on this site
Excellently written & well edited too

An absorbing story I totally enjoyed

Well done!

You truly deserved to win. I'm surprised and pleased that you wrote such a great male character. That inapirea and encourages me. I'm so happy ZafIra survived, too.

Just...wow.

I read the 2nd place story, and wondered how it was not the winner. Then, I read this one. Incredible.

John

Did all this come to you in a dream?

As a Christian without an agreeable life partner, I was coming to Literotica for the sole purpose of fapping but got side-tracked :) this provided lotsa theological stimulation for me. Thanks for writing this! :)

Wow

I really liked that there was a real story, not just sex.
Definitely worth reading !

Sooooo good!!! Amazingly well written, had me feeling emotions other than lust ;)

Give it six stars...

Great story! Great sex! Write more please!

Awesome!!!

Apart from a single word misspelled, it was epic!!!! Took me three days to finish it, but well worth the lengthy read!!

awesome

So awesome. The characters are so real. Read it from 12:00 am straight through 4:00. Just couldn't put it down. Time to sleep.

Very good

My greatest compliment... This is an impressive short story. Found myself skipping sex interludes to get back to the storyline

What an imagination!

Great story and equally great writing. I'm sure it's not easy to make something so fantastical to not appear tacky. I'll never look at Chicago's underpasses in the same way again. Just to be pedantic, page 15 mentions "time immortal" which I think should be time immemorial.

Incredible story

Great story, keep doing work of this quality. Incredible sex, and captivating plot, excellent!

be careful what you wish for

it may be more than you EVER dreamed!

the only castoff in this was the unfaithful wife. ALL others were a constant introduction to a new universe, parallel or otherwise.

what a wonderful tale. thank you for introducing me to a new genre.

my only regret in this wonderful story was Penny. She deserved more.