Wait, who is Kat? And why is she doing this? There was absolutely no foreplay in this sex scene. And that's what it was: a sex scene. Hot, but it isn't a story.
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Anonymous10/09/14
Wrong category
There sure isn't any loving wife here. In fact there doesn't seem to be a wife anywhere in sight. This felt more like an opening paragraph. There's a huge lack of information about these people. Who are they and why are they behaving like this? It made no sense. This was simply awful.
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Anonymous10/09/14
This is the second new writer
who posted today. Wish both had found another site to post on. We got enough scum writers in loving wives. Don't need anymore. 1*
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Anonymous10/09/14
Never met a Kat that isn't a naughty tart yet..
I've done quite a few of them. Lovely juicy little fuckers. 4*
1st - Not a LW; 2nd -She didn't understand that her boyfriend would never marry her, was just using her to have fun and make his friends use her too; When the time for him to marry and have children, he will choose a woman for he to love and she would find herself alone and talked by all his friends...is she stupid or what?
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Anonymous10/09/14
oh ya.
This romance is over, she is just another little whore, great to fuck but nothing else. Stupid story.
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Anonymous10/10/14
Judgmental Jerks
While this might not be the finest piece of fiction, what is with the judgmental comments??? I mean, really this is about wives who play -- if you don't like the subject, than skip the material
hot, if short. hope there will more stories about this gal and her adventures.
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Anonymous10/10/14
Loving wives
To say this is not a loving wives category not only shows your ignorance but hints at your hang-ups, perhaps you should resrict your reading material and let others write as they wish. FREEDOM !
i also think Literotica needs to give some more guidance about this category, if nothing else it may protect the feelings of those poor chaps who are smarting because their wife cheated.
To the previous person that commented, the admins have repeatedly clarified what the Loving Wives category is all about. The problem is that they don't enforce their own rules. They allow non-erotic stories about revenge to litter this category, and they allow stories where the primary focus is humiliation to be listed here as well. As a result, this category is a dumping ground for EVERY story that involves a wife, regardless of its primary theme.
The problem with this story being in this category is that there is no wife! She's a girlfriend. You'd think, at minimum, a Loving Wives story should have a wife.
Kat's a hot slut. I enjoyed the fast pace. Don't care that they aren't married, still some good action. What a turn on watching your girl suck off your best friend, then coming over and fucking you. Keep writing.
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Anonymous10/11/14
swingerjoe is retarded
Ignore the retarded troll.
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Anonymous10/12/14
No such thing as jealousy any more......
.....because, according to these stories, every man wants his girlfriend or wife to fuck everything in sight, because that's oh, so hot.....ya, until she's no longer interested in hubby or boyfriend because she likes variety better.
Smart! Real smart.
English
Kat needs Ed for what?
It will be great when Kat leaves Ed for Ted or whoever he is pushing on to now. The only reason to keep ed is for 3 hots and a cot.
No setup whatsoever
Wait, who is Kat? And why is she doing this? There was absolutely no foreplay in this sex scene. And that's what it was: a sex scene. Hot, but it isn't a story.
Wrong category
There sure isn't any loving wife here. In fact there doesn't seem to be a wife anywhere in sight. This felt more like an opening paragraph. There's a huge lack of information about these people. Who are they and why are they behaving like this? It made no sense. This was simply awful.
This is the second new writer
who posted today. Wish both had found another site to post on. We got enough scum writers in loving wives. Don't need anymore. 1*
Never met a Kat that isn't a naughty tart yet..
I've done quite a few of them. Lovely juicy little fuckers. 4*
1 *, why?
1st - Not a LW; 2nd -She didn't understand that her boyfriend would never marry her, was just using her to have fun and make his friends use her too; When the time for him to marry and have children, he will choose a woman for he to love and she would find herself alone and talked by all his friends...is she stupid or what?
oh ya.
This romance is over, she is just another little whore, great to fuck but nothing else. Stupid story.
Judgmental Jerks
While this might not be the finest piece of fiction, what is with the judgmental comments??? I mean, really this is about wives who play -- if you don't like the subject, than skip the material
great start
hot, if short. hope there will more stories about this gal and her adventures.
Loving wives
To say this is not a loving wives category not only shows your ignorance but hints at your hang-ups, perhaps you should resrict your reading material and let others write as they wish. FREEDOM !
i also think Literotica needs to give some more guidance about this category, if nothing else it may protect the feelings of those poor chaps who are smarting because their wife cheated.
Simple story but hey, it's a start.
Loving Wives
To the previous person that commented, the admins have repeatedly clarified what the Loving Wives category is all about. The problem is that they don't enforce their own rules. They allow non-erotic stories about revenge to litter this category, and they allow stories where the primary focus is humiliation to be listed here as well. As a result, this category is a dumping ground for EVERY story that involves a wife, regardless of its primary theme.
The problem with this story being in this category is that there is no wife! She's a girlfriend. You'd think, at minimum, a Loving Wives story should have a wife.
Enjoyable
Kat's a hot slut. I enjoyed the fast pace. Don't care that they aren't married, still some good action. What a turn on watching your girl suck off your best friend, then coming over and fucking you. Keep writing.
swingerjoe is retarded
Ignore the retarded troll.
No such thing as jealousy any more......
.....because, according to these stories, every man wants his girlfriend or wife to fuck everything in sight, because that's oh, so hot.....ya, until she's no longer interested in hubby or boyfriend because she likes variety better.
Smart! Real smart.
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