The Phillips Family Curse - Epilogue

What The Hell....

Too many unanswered questions!

Cliffhangers are one thing...setting the stage yet another...but this is a disappointment.

cant wait

As a long time reader i can honestly say im exctied for the big crossover event! I will be looking foward to that just like im looking foward to your next post! Please continue your amazing work. Your definitely my favorite author on this site.

I have found your stories amazing and especially The Phillips Family Curse and now you have me on the edge of my seat waiting on what Grandmom is going to do and this new undertaking. Please don't make me wait too long

Nicely Done!!!

Nice setup for the next "branch" of the story. This is both an epilogue to the Phillips Family Curse and an introduction to the War...
You've left enough intrigue dangling out there to insure my One I will be on the look out for your next offering. Thanks for sharing!

Great, but different than your previous work

Another great piece, but it didn't really resonate with me as much as your other stories. I was trying to put my finger down on why and finally think I know. This isnt a knock on the story - it was really well written, the dialog was hot as fuck and the descriptions were amazing -- but I had some fundamental premise issues that nagged at me.

I'm just throwing this out there --- you don't have to change a thing and I'd still be a huge fan.

The thing that attracted me most to your stories was the idea of corruption. Really twisted and dark corruption. It's like DarkBetrayal, etc. The corruption here was twisted -- don't get me wrong -- just not twisted in the way you have done in the past.

In some of your previous stories, a big part of the corruption was taking the protaganist and having him completely throw away the people he loves and loved him. The character here was in a relatively new relationship with his first serious girlfriend. There's nothing really there to corrupt?

Now the guy with the family... that's twisted and dark. Throwing away a loving marriage that the readers spend some time investing in (like in Beach Bubble Butts or Church on State) is real betrayal. We barely got to meet the girlfriend in this story. Let's be honest here, making a college relationship that has lasted a short amount of time break up is not on the same level.

The other side of the coin is in some of your stories, alot of the venom from the girls is targeted AT the wife or family. It's less about corrupting the guy and more about destroying the woman with the guy's help. Letting a rival ultimately win.

Look at "The Hotel Room" or the "Devil Wears Nada". The husbands in those stories doesn't just dump their wives. They willfully destroy their wives' careers and future to get some hot slut off. (These stories have a very similar feel to a DarkBetrayal story). In "Hurricane Gina", the husband basically chooses to commit his wife to fuck his mother in law. This story, on the other hand, basically had less than 2 pages of Sandy being torn down, and I'm pretty sure she'll be fine in the long run.

This is kind of why I love your Surrounded series. It's the exact opposite of this. The girls in it are out to wreck Amanda. They both have long histories with her, the husband is emotionally attached to her and is constantly conflicted. But slowly, he falls into a corruption that she only sort of picks up on. There's a scene where Matt turns down sex with his wife because of a promise to Michelle. Watching him crush his wife's self esteem cause of some other hot girl is the hottest thing you've ever done (imo). The story is full of stuff like that (the femdom aspect, etc.) True deep betrayal.

So yea, that's just my two cents -- I don't know if many people share that opinion (the stories I like best tend to not have the "H" next to them on the list page), but I wanted to share it as a huge fan of your work.

Thanks again for your writing, I look forward to more.

Extended pregnancy plot shooting blanks

No witticisms and no liasons, just two blue haired dowagers threatening each other. Worse yet, they sound sterious. The wannabe Machiavellian grandma character has been dragging the whole series down, but its not my story. You can put all the lipstick you want on this pig of a subplot but judging by number of comments , the readers aren't buying in.

File this one under mega-talented author pleasing mainly himself and a few hard core fans. This is TalkMan's ' One From the Heart' ala Coppola.

You are a long awaited Oedipal visionary!

I have been waiting for a while for the next truly great writer of mother/son sex epics to emerge. You may well be the one. Your Oedipal vision is unique and provocative, more interesting than anyone else who has posted into years. It has to do with your grasp and handling of the perversity of it all. No shilly shallying with the lust involved on the part of your characters. I must confess that I am not into sex with grandma. I might be an Oedipalist freak, but not that much of a freak. Sex with mom, aunt, cousins and older sister are, on the other hand, much more to my taste. And shouldn't Helen be past menopause, thus ending her child bearing years? Well, I suppose it is not impossible that menopause has not yet come upon her. I know, I know. I am a fine one to have such boundaries of the erotic imagination? But I do. In any event, you keep me interested regardless. That is a measure of your excellence.
You may well go off the rails into abject absurdity. I hope not. But that is your risk in being a visionary. A new way of looking at sex between a guy and his older female relatives.
Just go for it and let's see how it plays out.

Who else but...

...Madeline Crow. A well-written piece of erotica.

Just two things - number one, PLEASE work on your style. Pick a tense and go with it. Work on your word choice.

And also - Surrounded Part 4. Please.

Phillips vs Crow

Should make for an Interesting Confrontation. Loved the story and will be waiting for the Next installment.

A well done story

its good to see an author continuing a series and not just repeating himself constantly like so many others. Waiting for for crow vs Phillips.

I would have preferred the women to be more aggressive. Seducing him and finally forcing him to fuck them.
Anyhow I loved the buildup of the tension. Very very well written!